Coca-cola Girl

First, i have to say that your piece reads really well from afar: we get the sense and the idea of the picture, the colors are vivids, they work really well despite the back behind red, you pulled it off nicely with the gradient on the red and the deep red of the can and her shirt. From up close, the values are still pretty decent, the shape and line flow are still pretty good but that's where it needs a little tweaking. The edges of her form seems a bit too clean as if you used the eraser to sculpt the outline. I suggest painting with the backgroud color to define the figure or retouching after the eraser. Proportions are a little off in her eyes and left hand but overall still feel decent. Skintones are really good on her thighs and bust. Overall a really cool piece, i really like it, just be careful with outlines, that's the main thing that caught my eye. Thumbs up!